This snippet: Aithne surveys Finn.
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She raked her gaze over him from head to toe, surveying his
appearance before finding his face. She said nothing, only cocking her
head a bit and smiling, revealing that amazing dimple. As their
expressions fixed on each other, Finn sensed a heated and sensuous light
pass between them. She licked her lips, and his pulse quickened.
He pursed his lips. He supposed he should be surprised the woman of
his visions was Jasper's daughter, but now that he thought about it, it
explained much.
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"My father's sent a man who is finally brave enough to walk through
the bonfires, Darius."
Finn glanced at Darius, who frowned his displeasure.
Finn glanced at Darius, who frowned his displeasure.
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There's a bit of tension building here...walking through a bonfire, I hope he's got magical protection!
ReplyDeleteLove it. Love then tension that is starting to unfold in this snippet.
ReplyDeleteThe story ahead promises to be very interesting indeed. Great snippet to get us hooked :-)
ReplyDeleteThere is so much tension between Finn and Darius. I wonder if she just didn't notice or if she wants to play with it.
ReplyDeleteVery good. Your word choices & language capture the spirit of your setting.
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