Hi all, I'm participating in the Weekend Warriors Snippet Sunday. This month, I'll be taking snippets from my 99 cent sweet/sensual paranormal romance, "Night of Magic."
Night of Magic
Paranormal Romance
BLURB: Finn meets Aithne.
This snippet:
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"Where should we start?" she
asked.
Finn held out his wrists again. "Untie
me."
Her eyes grew hooded like a hawk's and
she glided across the floor to the glass door, ignoring his request. Opening
the door, she let cool air into the room. Starlight softened her appearance.
*****
AMAZON: http://amzn.com/B00D2XP4R6
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Steph
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Steph
Yes, indeed you do have a nice cover. Nice 8.
ReplyDeleteShe's comes across as a bit haughty. In these few lines there's tension. Good job.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, especially her choice not to untie him. Intriguing excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI love what she's saying here, by saying nothing. It's a great moment!
ReplyDeleteI like that she doesn't immediately untie him. Piques my curiosity.
ReplyDeleteI think it's funny she asks where to start...but then doesn't do as he asks.
ReplyDeleteGreat cover! Love the excerpt. Makes me wonder why he was tied up in the first place.
ReplyDeleteShe's in charge. I like that a lot! Nice moody piece.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet. Can't wait to see where they DO start...
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